Developmental Editing
Substantive, also known as developmental, editing is my most comprehensive service, focusing on the big picture and the core effectiveness of your content. This is best for early to mid-stage drafts that need significant shaping and guidance. I'll work closely with you to address fundamental elements such as:
Overall organization and structure of your manuscript or paper
Development of arguments or themes
Pacing and flow of the narrative (for fiction and non-fiction stories)
Character development and plot consistency (for fiction)
Clarity and logical progression of your ideas
Effectiveness of your evidence or research (for academic papers)
Audience engagement and impact



Strengthen the foundation of your work.
With detailed feedback and direct suggestions, ensuring your piece achieves its purpose and captivates your audience.
Timeline & Format
Turnaround times typically range from a few weeks to several months, depending on the length and complexity. For a full-length novel (80,000-100,000 words), this can take 40-100 hours, or 6-8 weeks total effort.
Whether you prefer the ease of cloud-based saving or working locally, you're covered. We can collaborate directly in Google Docs, or you're welcome to send a Microsoft Word document.
Developmental Editing Rates
Per Word
$0.035
Per Page
$7.50
Per Hour
$50